"At times I felt so confused that I felt like the stem of a pinwheel surrounded by whir and clatter." Comparing what?
To what?
Simile or Metaphor?

Which words most the reader understand the meaning of usurpers

The outsiders how johnny got hurt. how does this affect his personality ?

100 points and brainiest for if u go to my previous questions u can answer the 100 pointers think of an intense argument you had or witnessed sometime in your life. close your eyes and remember every detail. to turn this into a dramatic scene you will need to make changes that will make it make more sense to the audience. 500-600 words a description of the set up that explains what happened before the scene diction that matches the characters character objectives and obstacles are clearly conveyed a scene that escalates in dramatic intensity diction that is appropriate to the audience words that are not wasted in idle chit chat action (stage directions) that enhance the scene proper formatting for drama