Analyzing the Conclusion be
(1) Eventually, with steadfastness, patience, and hard
Read the conclusion of the personal statement, and
then answer the questions.
work, I learned how to bake my very own beautifully
risen chocolate cake. (2) But I learned more than just growing from an experience?
Which sentences show the writer reflecting on and
a baking skill, because I also learned a lot about
myself. (3) I learned that through the challenges I
face, I can discover what I am truly passionate about.
When does the writer connect these experiences to the
future goal?
(4) I am proud and excited to pursue my dream of
becoming a pastry chef.

The major was a little man with upturned mustaches. he had been in the war in libya and wore two wound-stripes. he said that if the thing went well he would see that i was decorated. i said i hoped it would go well but that he was too kind. i asked him if there was a big dugout where the drivers could stay and he sent a soldier to show me. i went with him and found the dugout, which was very good. the drivers were with it and i left them there. what effect does hemingway’s limited use of adjectives have? it slows down the narration by interrupting the action. it makes the few descriptive words he does use more vivid and forceful. it makes the narrator seem powerless and insincere. it prevents the readers from filling in the details with their own experiences.