Read the introduction to a personal statement. What makes the first sentence a strong opening for this
introduction?
Usually, when people talk about "rocky" relationships, it's
with a frown, but mine has enriched my life. I became
fascinated with rocks when I was really young, and
throughout my childhood you could usually find me with
my pockets bulging from whatever stony treasures I'd
scavenged that day. When my science teacher taught
us a unit on geology, I realized that my fascination could
become an exciting career that could also help me make
good money. Obtaining an internship to work on the
geological exhibit at the museum is an important step on
my road to being a geologist.
O The writer uses creativity and humor to engage the
reader.
O The writer ponders childhood to stir up the reader's
memories.
O The writer introduces the topic immediately to inform
the reader.
O The writer complains about relationships to gain the
reader's sympathy.