How can you determine where to elaborate when you revise a reflective essay? What are some useful strategies? (write like a short paragraph, but make sure it's not too detailed lol)

Acquiring english is a way of learning where you learn english by birth, this includes listening to your parents, brothers and sisters and on the whole learning it from the environment around you while mastering standard english need qualified institutes and teachers who make certain programs and syllabus to you master the standard english. this also can include a long session of academic studies before you can master the standard english.standard english is necessary for literary works, official usage and writing materials for standardized publications or when someone needs to speak publicly. in most cases the employers of a company also demand and like the use of standard english from their employees. 

That would be plagiarism

Hi, my name is maya gupta.i'm here at a bank robbery that happened a few minutes ago.a man named tryce ramder is suspected to be the robber.i am here with daniel cottle to describe what happened."it was terrifying. we all just heard the door break and turned around. some man just had a gun and told us to freeze and drop our phones. luckily we had cameras. continuing on, the man walked up to a worker, and said "give me the money or i'll shoot you." i did not believe what i heard. after a few minutes, we heard sirens, and the robber looked fearful, yet so angry. so he took out a bomb and threw it near us. i was in the military, so i know what to do, so i told everyone to move away atleast and duck down and cover their ears. i almost got affected, but some woman was able to grab me and put me down, and cover my ears. she got affected, she passed out, and was taken to the hospital. i am gonna visit her now to her and give her gifts for what she did." you daniel cottle, let's all hope this woman will be alright. i am maya gupta and we are signing off. (sorry if it's too long, maybe this will you get an idea? )