Revise the narrative by adding in transitional words, phrases, and clauses. You can add details to make the writing more interesting as well. Frankie and Sam had to get ready for the big game. They went to the dry cleaner to pick up their uniforms. They tuned their instruments. They went to the football field. The football game started. They sat on the bench and waited for halftime. The game stopped. They got in the line formation with the others. They played ,"We Will Rock You". The audience cheered.