Which statement best evaluates the effect of changing the pace in the second version of the passage?

Is "they" an unstressed or stressed syllable?

What is the best definition of detonation a.) the meaning of the word in a different language b.)the dictionary meaning of the word c.) the additional meaning that comes from the feeling one gets from a word d.) the meaning of irony

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?