Read the paragraph Which revision should be made to this paragraph?
O "Finally should be added to the beginning of
sentence 1
(1) Wordsworth believed that poetry should include
emotional experiences, and his poem " Wandered
Lonely as a Cloud includes several of these
experiences. (2) Furthermore, the speaker encounters
a field of daffodils that he describes as "jocund
company." (3) Later, as the speaker reflects on seeing
the cheerful daffodils, he says the memory gives him
great joy. 4) The speaker realizes that the memory of
the flowers provides a more powerful emotional
experience than the experience itself did.
O In sentence 2. "furthermore should be changed to
"specifically"
O In sentence 3, "later should be changed to
"therefore."
O "Moreover" should be added to the beginning of
sentence 4.

In sentence 2. "furthermore should be changed to "specifically"

Explanation:

The revision that should be made to this paragraph is that in sentence 2, "furthermore should be changed to "specifically"

By changing "Furthermore" to " Specifically", it means that the idea is stated better as it's described precisely and clearly.

cabeza de vaca was an spanish explorer and n his long exploration of 11,000.km. from florida to present-day mexico, he went through a series of calamities and setbacks that only added to his deeds. he applied his religious creed with the humanist idea, always current and universal, that all men were equal before god and destiny without any discrimination. as an explorer, he became a slave to the tipinoga, then his shaman pointer, later and after an operation of heart to an indian (from which both came alive) he achieved stardom and became a hero followed by a crowd that professed unusual respect and admiration.

the answer is: round.

in literature, round characters are considerably complex and experience or are subjected to unpleasant situations. as a consequence, they go through crucial sentimental and psychological development, which can cause surprise in the readers. in this case, juan's dramatic transformation is related to the adversities he meets at school.