What is the main problem with this conclusion paragraph? Thesis statement: kids should be required to volunteer in their community's
Main point's: it is good for the people who receive help.
it is good for the volunteers.
it will build lifelong habits.
conclusions: for me, volunteering wasn't just good for the people I was helping, it was also good for me. If kids start volunteering when they are young, they will continue the good habit into adulthood. When everyone contributes by volunteering, our community is a better place.
A. it does not summarize the main points
B. it does not have a satisfying close.
C. it adds new information.
D. it does not restate the thesis.

What is one example of the cultural context of a story

Me i will give brainiest which excerpt from the passage most effectively contributes to the development of the theme that the bond between fathers and daughters is sacred and everlasting? '"may i not see the little one, sir, for a moment? ' it was his belief that mini was still the same." "i remembered the day when the cabuliwallah and my mini had first met, and i felt sad. when she had gone, rahmun heaved a deep sigh, and sat down on the floor." "this touch of his own little daughter had been always on his heart, as he had come year after year to calcutta to sell his wares in the streets." "he came close up to me holding out his offerings with the words: 'i brought these few things, sir, for the little one. will you give them to her? "'

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?