Please help me I would appreciate it Also Ask yourself these questions as you revise:

• Does my thesis statement follow naturally from my research? Will my thesis statement, subtopics, and evidence all come across as related? Do I make that relationship clear to the reader?

• Does my introduction paragraph grab the reader's attention and present the thesis statement? Does it provide enough background information for the reader to understand the thesis statement?

• Do my body paragraphs all present evidence from credible sources? Do they show how the evidence is connected to my overall point? Does each body paragraph include a topic sentence that makes it clear what each paragraph is about?

• Do I use in-text citations correctly? Do they follow MLA guidelines? Do I show good judgment about when to paraphrase and when to quote from a source?