Read this excerpt from the Declaration of Independence: He has erected a multitude of New Offices, and sent hither
swarms of Officers to harrass our people, and eat out their
substance.
Which of these rhetorical devices is most clearly used in the underlined
portion of the text?

d rising action

he chooses to climb mount everest and decided not to any more due to the 1,000s of people making a line on the mountion

explanation:

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

if you don't mind posting the paragraph so i could read it that would a lot. (;