I got 11 out of 15, and I feel like it's not accurate so I'm paying to get it re-marked, do you think I deserved to lose 4 points? Check the picture,
the “grading criteria “:

Proper Essay Division : 3

Relevance: 2

Proper Idea Development:3

Grammar: 3

Spelling: 1

Punctuation:2

Transition words & Phrases:1

Total :15

I know I had two mistakes (your instead of you're, and on the other hands instead of on the other hand) but those are spelling mistakes and spelling has 1 point only so I feel like losing half a point is fair maybe?

Explain what effect the repetition of the lines brennan on the moor, brennan on the moor, bold and undaunted stood young brennan on the has on the meaning of the poem. use at two details from the text to support your answer. use the raqeqec format and write down the line number for your quote

Ais a group of individuals of the same that exist in the same place at the same time

Ill give 50 points and brainiest if i can. would be grateful for any on this. the industrial revolution moved the united states into a new economic era. using the resources provided respond to the following prompts as they deal with economic development in the united states. using the maps available on the web links tab, explain the economic development of the united states, especially in regard to its emergence as a major industrial power. (focus on industrial sections; cities and towns; territorial growth; agricultural, mineral, and resource regions; coal fields; slavery; value and production; and distribution of agriculture and manufacturing areas.) using the available maps, explain the economic advantages of the physical geography of the united states. explain the gains that the united states made from trade.