I got 11 out of 15, and I feel like it's not accurate so I'm paying to get it re-marked, do you think I deserved to lose 4 points? Check the picture,
It’s a general course that I have to take so I don’t really wanna waste grades

the “grading criteria “:

Proper Essay Division : 3

Relevance: 2

Proper Idea Development:3

Grammar: 3

Spelling: 1

Punctuation:2

Transition words & Phrases:1

Total :15

I know I had two mistakes (your instead of you're, and on the other hands instead of on the other hand) but those are spelling mistakes and spelling has 1 point only so I feel like losing half a point is fair maybe?

Not really

Explanation:

You did fairly well, typos don't matter so much, but they could raise your score a bit. Spelling should be 2 or maybe 1.5, two typos don't matter so much. You did well though. You deserved a 12 or maybe 11.5

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."

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