Read the passage and highlight sentence fluency errors you find. Political documents from the time of the United States’ independence are important, other written accounts and even fiction from that time period can be just as valuable. Such as journal entries and poetry. These documents are interesting to read they give glimpses into daily life and values during an important time in our country’s history.

in paragraph 6 of "sinners in the hands of an angry god" by jonathan edwards, he talks about how doing good things alone will not save men from going to hell because they're at the mercy of the will of god. "spiritual reform" provides men with a false sense of safety.

it should be repealed cuase its not fair

“way of writing” should be replaced with “writing style"

“idea” should be replaced with “purpose.”

maybe   “people from a long time ago” should be replaced with “elizabethans.”