Javier trained for his first marathon for months. He learned to pace himself and to push through the pain. He developed blisters and shin splints. It broke his heart not to finish.
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Javier trained for his first marathon for months after he learned to pace himself and to push through the pain. Additionally,
he developed blisters and shin splints. In the end, it broke his heart not to finish.
Javier trained for his first marathon for months. First, he learned to pace himself and to push through the pain. Next, he
developed blisters and shin splints. Finally, it broke his heart not to finish.
Javier trained for his first marathon for months. He learned to pace himself and to push through the pain. Also, he
developed blisters and shin splints. Similarly, it broke his heart not to finish.
Javier trained for his first marathon for months. He learned to pace himself and to push through the pain. But during the
race, he developed blisters and shin splints. Because of that he had to stop, and it broke his heart when he couldn't finish.

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each year on march 8, international women’s day is celebrated around the globe. it’s an important opportunity to shine a spotlight on women’s involvement, contributions, and accomplishments on a range of issues from domestic violence to the role of women in the c-suite. the theme this year is “be bold for change”― a dictum that those who know me personally will acknowledge has pretty much been my mantra throughout my career on wall street, in media and most recently, in philanthropy.the empowerment of girls as leaders, who can be emboldened today to become even stronger leaders tomorrow, is an increasingly recognized imperative in our world, and it couldn’t be closer to my heart

throughout the ancient epic of gilgamesh, the protagonist, gilgamesh of course, exhibited many character traits that made him a true epic hero. one great trait that gilgamesh acquires of an epic hero is that he's a courageous and confident leader. in the text enkidu is too afraid to fight, but he's positive that gilgamesh has the ability to triumph against humbaba. gilgamesh tells enkidu to not be afraid and then continues on to remind him of all the victories he's had against similar foe. gilgamesh proves that he's confident by encouraging enkidu and shows he's courageous when enkidu ask gilgamesh to battle humbaba alone because he knows that gilgamesh will reign victorious.

another characteristic that makes gilgamesh an epic hero is that he's brave and takes risks. "dread surged through gilgamesh, terror flooded his muscles, his heart froze, his mouth went dry, his legs shook, his feet were rooted to the ground. / gilgamesh felt his courage return. they charged at humbaba like two wild bulls." when reading the first part of the quote you see that gilgamesh is terrified of humbaba, and realizing that humbaba is the antagonist he's about to battle is taking a big risk. gilgamesh soon shows how brave he is by not letting his fear of humbaba overtake him, instead he went charging into the face of fear and triumphs.