For this activity, you will read a paragraph that has many errors. You will identify the errors, and re-write the paragraph using correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, and mechanics. Original Paragraph:

Malcolm was an avid photographer. He and his family likes to take pictures of nature and also taking
portraits. When he was in california Malcolm liked to visit lake tahoe and takes pictures of the wildlife and
sometimes the animals were moving to fast and they was blurry but the pictures of the lake were always perfect. Including pictures of sunsets over the lake with the mountains in the background.

Check for:
•Subject verb agreement
•Run-ons and sentence fragments
•Capitalization and Punctuation
•Grammar and Understandability
•Sentence Variety and Style