To any of you who have a love for poetry, tell me what you guys think of my poem. It's meant to be an extended metaphor poem. Please give me honest responses so I can improve.

Very sweet poem

I loved ur poem

You should write like this poem more and more and one day you may become a very popular poet

the answer:

in the first part of the story running is all that matters to squeaky. running gives her confidence and defines who she is. at the beginning of the story she says that other kids call her mercury because she runs very fast. in the text she refers to herself as "miss quicksilver".

the line that provides the best evidence that squeaky has self-confidence is

" and i continue with my breathing exercise, strolling down broadway toward the ice cream man on 145th with not a care in the world cause i am miss quicksilver herself".

the answer is d: message a character's thoughts