English, 10.10.2021 17:40 shaylawymannnnn
If you guys give me actual feedback, I'll give you brainliest ;)
So for creative writing, I had to make a poem or a song, for someone you hold dear to your heart. I wrote this song, and please let me know if i have anything that needs fixing, because if there are no mistakes, I'll get 20 extra points, and I need all the extra credit i can get, because I have a D in the class.
Butterflies
Im waking up, im breathing in,
your next to me, smiling.
Your so sweet, its madness
i dunno why you do this but i love it
Im reeling in the catch of the day
laughing hard while you tackle me
im so in love, I'd call myself insane.
just to come by and be your soul mate.
Whoa-oh
whoa-oh
i think im catching butterflies
whoa-oh
whoa-oh
im loving you until i die.
That is a promise,
that i'm willing to keep
im being honest
when i say i need you with me,
i know your the hardest,
and i know that you'll miss me
Never gonna stop it
keep giving you kisses
I shake enough, every day
When I'm with you, anyway.
i love it when you hold me,
and i know your the one and only.
Im waiting for you all day
Im shaking when you say you love me
Im hoping we never end
i just wanna keep holding your hand.
Whoa-oh
whoa-oh
i think im catching butterflies
whoa-oh
whoa-oh
Baby, your my only light.
That is a promise,
that i'm willing to keep
im being honest
when i say i need you with me,
i know your the hardest,
and i know that you'll miss me
Never gonna stop it
keep giving you kisses
keep giving you kisses .
i never smile, i never grin,
but you made me feel so different
I always smile, i always grin,
my life's so good now that your in it.
That is a promise,
that i'm willing to keep
im being honest
when i say i need you with me,
i know your the hardest,
and i know that you'll miss me
Never gonna stop it
keep giving you kisses
that a promise, a promise.
I'm honest, so honest,
when i say i love you
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