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Part Two: Revise the global, paragraph, and sentence elements, Consider the following categories and questions to help your peer revise. Highlight three specific areas
your peer should revise and provide comments below giving them feedback on how to approach those
revisions. You should provide at least one comment for each area you have highlighted.
Development/Paragraphs
→ Is the purpose of your composition clear?
→ Is the thesis/
main idea clear and specific?
→ How are you appealing to your intended
audience/readers?
→ Does the essay develop in a logical order?
Is it organized to facilitate ease of
comprehension?
Sentences
→ Does every sentence accurately reflect your
intended meaning?
→ Are there any places you should edit for
wordiness, misplaced words, spelling,
capitalization, or other mechanical issues?
→ How could your word choice be more
precise?
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