1. Kelly Sly has given this story to her editor, who finds new mistakes—seven to be precise! 2. Can you find them all? Write the change on the lines below.
3. The capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling, and sentence structure are correct. You need to change the
ideas in the story [revise).
you wi...
I visited the harbor on Saturday, September 31. I was after a gang of smugglers operating out of a
four-engine sailboat docked at pier 3. A quick view of the vessel showed the anchor safely pulled up. I
walked up the gangplank onto the deck and looked for somewhere to hide. A barrel full of ropes seemed
ideal, so I climbed in and waited. It wasn't long before some men appeared. "We share the loot three
ways, like we always do," said one. The others nodded sullenly. Unfortunately, I chose that moment to
Sneeze. They were onto me immediately, dragging me from the tight funnel. "A spy! Throw her
overboard!" cried the one with the black long-sleeved shirt and the tattoos on his back. "Look behind
you!" I screamed, and as they turned, I dove into the murky river. Unfortunately, the smugglers spotted
me and finished me with a fatal shot.
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Explanation:

The capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling, and sentence structure are correct. You need to change the ideas in the story (revise).

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

jim mohr

explanation: