You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made. Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing. paragraph >>>>> Komodo dragon are deadly creatures Yet villagers who have lived for generations alongside the world's largest lizard were not afraid until the dragons started to attack. In the article Giant lizards of Indonesia says ‘’ Milani explains that last year, one of her friends, a 9-year-old boy, was attacked and killed by a Komodo dragon.’’ R. A WALLAMI “The Komodo bit him and then smashed him against the rocks ”R. A WALLAMI , it’s not just people getting attacked by these dragons the animals are to for example goats, chickens’ etcetera. To avoid getting attacked by a Komodo dragon put up fences and call the authorities if spotted one near you.