3. Revise and edit the paragraph. Ensure that it uses correct pronoun-antecedent agreement. When Steinbeck shifts the setting to the moving car though, we learn different things about
Elisa. For example, when the car passes the stranger's team of livestock, Elisa makes an
important gesture by turning away from them, showing her internal struggle. The road setting
also reveals Elisa's vulnerable side. One of the story's final paragraphs depicts Elisa huddled in
her coat and crying as the car continues to speed along. Without this new setting, Elisa might
never have learned the true intentions of the stranger Each of the details of the setting that
Steinbeck focuses on reveals Elisa's vulnerability in their own way.