Read the excerpt from Carla's rhetorical analysis essay
Which revision reflects the voice that is most
appropriate for the essay's purpose?
Clinton uses pathos when she says, "No one should be
forced to remain silent for fear of religious or political
persecution, arrest, abuse, or torture." I believe she
uses this appeal successfully by incorporating
provocative diction to create an emotional response in
her audience.
O Ms. Clinton uses pathos when she says...
o I think she uses pathos when she says...
O Clinton uses this appeal successfully by
incorporating
O In my opinion, she uses this appeal successfully