A. Read the draft model. Use the questions to help you add facts to the writing.
Draft Model
Many kinds of fish live in the ocean. Fish can be big
or small. Some fish like to swim together.
1. What is the topic of your writing?
2. What details tell about the main idea?
3. What facts could you add to the writing?
B. Now revise the draft by adding facts to the
writing.

answer; ///(a)//the death of his

anyone who was dealing with communism in soviet union in his time had an ideal picture of equality, freedom, the struggle of the working class for a better future, the success of the aristocracy's overthrow and the emancipation of subjugation.   however, anyone who would go to soviet union to see the functioning of the communist system, would be convinced that it was about sad people, about everyday bad life, about the brutal attitude of communist leaders, about ill obsession to completely exterminate every thought on aristocracy. thus, orwell wanted to show all the absurdity, the brutality of the system, the unbearable rule of suspicious morality, the ignorant people who try to play professionally.

the answers are: b. and e.

i think its d

hope i can you