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Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document.
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This is my body: Second, let's talk about the negative effects of this situation. One of the negative effects is that computers offer the advantage of doing much more than playing games. Like I said before, video games can have good effects and bad effects, but this one is definitely one of the bad , because this could really mess up the value and the advantages, since not all computers function the same way, and here's why.'' They offered game developers enhanced more, speed, and display capabilities, allowing the creation of more complex games. Furthermore, another negative effect would be, '' The Fairchild Video Entertainment System, from 1976, and the Atari 2600 VCS( Video Computer System), from 1977, were the first systems to use game cartridges that were inserted into special slots.

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Explanation:

Second, let's talk about the negative effects of this situation. One of the adverse effects is that computers offer the advantage of doing much more than playing games. Since not all computers function the same way, it can create good and bad effects, messing up the value and the advantages. (What are the quotes for and where do they stop?)''They offered game developers enhanced(missing a word?) more, speed, and display capabilities, allowing the creation of more complex games. Furthermore, another negative effect would be,(quotes here but where do they end?) '' The Fairchild Video Entertainment System, from 1976, and the 1977 Atari 2600 VCS (Video Computer System), were the first systems to use game cartridges inserted into special slots.

given the fact that the question is about the detail that best support the idea that oppressive leaders use   propaganda to achieve thir goals,   the first option does not refer to any kind of propaganda, since it only tells about that the milk and the windfall apple should be reserved for the pigs. in the second option, that is, "snowball and napoleon sent out flights of pigeons whose instructions were to mingle with the animals on the neighbouring farms, tell them the story of the rebellion, and teach them the tune of "beasts of england". it can be identified that the oppressors make use of the propaganda, which is represented by the pigeons, and the information they have to tell other animals about what was happening in the farm in order to get their objectives. for that reason, the right answer is the second option, taking into account that the third option do not refer to propaganda since it only talks about that they did not want jones back. and, finally, the last option refers to the result of the given news, but it does not mean about the propaganda they used to achieve their goals.

pandas are endangered because of habitat destruction by humans.

as of 2014 there were around 2,000 left, since then, it supposedly has risen 17%.

they are a very endangered species.

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