List the three main sections of a composition and briefly describe what should be accomplished in each. Identify the examples of strong thesis statements. Rewrite those that are weak thesis statements. Censorship is a bad thing. The brief history of television is punctuated by major changes in technology. World history is full of conflict. Although fitness experts all agree that weightlifting can be beneficial, they disagree over the ideal regimen. My sister could easily be mistaken for my mother sometimes. Only a fool would smoke cigarettes in the face of all the medical research proving the countless detrimental effects of smoking.

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.

d. therefore pilots wisely train these cubs by various strategic tricks to look danger in the face a little more calmly.

c or d they are the same