The song Heard Round the World Read the following sentence from the second paragraph,
From there, it became a familiar song to many people,
Which of the following revisions would make this sentence more specific
Patty Smith Hill, who lived from 1868 to 1946, was an
American educator Although her name may be unfamiliar,
she wrote a world famous song. It is the "Happy Birthday
song, Patty also developed the Patty Hill Blocks for
children
The "Happy Birthday song actually began as the
"Good Morning to All song. Patty and her sister Mildred
came up with the song in 1893 in Louisville, Kentucky
Patty wrote the words and Mildred came up with the
melody. The song would be sung to a class of
Kindergarten students every moming At some point, the
words were changed to "Happy Birthday From there, it
became a familiar song to many people,
Time Warner Inc. eventually purchased the nights to
"Happy Birthday" However, this doesn't mean that people
who sing "Happy Birthday at private parties have to pay a
fee. Time Warner in just gets paid anytime the song is
sung in a move or TV show in places, such as
restaurants, the words of melody are often changed when
the song is performed so that the businesses do not have
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A From there, it became a popular song that most people knew
B. From there, it became memorable tune that some people in many other places enjoyed,
C. From there, it became a song that many people could recognize,
D From there, it became the traditional song that people would sing at birthday parties.
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