Compared to the dialogue that makes up most of the excerpt, which unfolds in real time, the paragraph below is fast paced, covering many events into a very short passage. Write your own version of this paragraph, revising the pacing so that it unfolds more slowly and describes the scene with more details. As you write, remember to: Flesh out scene the with effective word choice and vivid description. Maintain the style and tone that the author has established. Use a variety of phrases and dependent clauses to slow down the pacing and add details.

the development of trade during the middle age increased to the change given in the agriculture, which gave money, industry and markets a bigger importance in economy. the agriculture production was more than the consumption, which meant the creation of wider markets out of the areas. besides, with the end of multiple wars, the population increased and new trade routes were created.

in our power to make a world happy - to teach mankind the art of being so - to a character hitherto unknown - and to have, as it were, a new creation intrusted to our hands, are honors that command reflection, and can neither be too highly estimated,