Write a body paragraph that supports the claim that making mistakes help people learn. In your writing, be sure to include the elements ofis
1. Focus/Organization: Did you introduce the topic of the paragraph? Did you
maintain your reason with a logical organization of ideas from beginning to end?
Did
you wrap up your paragraph with a concluding thought?
2. Evidence/elaboration: Did you use sufficient and relevant textual evidence to
support your analysis? Did you elaborate on each evidence?
3. Conventions: Appropriate transitions, precise language, and a formal and
objective language and tone.