Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the now and writing style of a story?
O A. Raven picked up the phone on the first ring, but the caller was
blunt. "I hear you want to talk to me for your article for the
newspaper," said the voice. She tried desperately to remember the
questions she had for the mobster, so Raven steadied her voice,
She began, so she said "Yes." She continued, and said "Where can
you meet me?"
B. Raven picked up the phone on the first ring, and the caller was
blunt. "I hear you want to talk to me for your article for the
newspaper," said the voice, and she tried desperately to remember
the questions she had for the mobster, Raven steadied her voice,
and then she began, "Yes," she said, and then, "Where can you
meet me?"
C. Raven picked up the phone. It was the first ring, The caller was
blunt. "I hear you want to talk to me for your article for the
newspaper," the voice said, Raven tried desperately to remember
the questions she had for the mobster. She steadied her voice,
She began, "Yes," she said, "Where can you meet me?"
D. Raven picked up the phone on the first ring. The caller was blunt."