From the story Girl by Jamaica Kincaid Writing prompt (letter)

Imagine you are a parent who has a Daughter.

What would you want to tell them: What would you warn them
about. Encourage them to do. How to act. Who to be. Think of
the things you would tell her that you feel are important.
Lessons, practices, behaviors, etc.

Using this info, pen your own story/letter/ to your child.
Use “Girl” as a model or go your own way.
Must be 500 words

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

bevy means a large group or thing of a certain kind.

theres no poem include that