Gill's argument about the media's coverage of Disney princesses is a narrow topic, yet she spends twelve pages making her analysis. Which of the following revisions could she have made to shorten
her analysis without compromising its strength?

what are your options

because of all the immigration, america became one big melting pot. the diversity of cultures from all over the world made america somewhat divided as well. people that immigrated stayed with their kind, and their traditions, while native born americans stayed with their kind and their traditions. normally, people born in american scorned the immigrants as well. the new religions also divided america. in summary, it took away from the american culture and identified america as the "melting pot."