(100 POINTS) I wrote a poem (sonnet) for English class, and I had to write it in old English. I am not certain if the poem makes much since so, I would like for someone to tell me if the poem sounds correct and what I could do to improve it. For I needless say that mine heart will beat within its space,
without a response to beat at that harmonious pace
That you may see across my youth day to day.
Lonely will mine heart carry on to the thoughts of a piece
That will satisfy my heart and give me peace,
Nay, my heart will beat forever more alone
As the lone wind that chills me to the bone
Lost forever shall my heart be beating alone with no one around to call my own.
So, from this moment on
I acknowledge that my heart might not belong
To another that may beat on its own
But this douth not mean that I am completely alone
For The Lord up above calls me his own
And who in this world could compete with The Lord who has my soul to keep?

For it goes without saying that my heart will beat within its space, without a response to beat at that harmonious pace that you can see across my youth from day to day.

Lonely will my heart follow the thoughts of a piece.

That will satisfy my soul and bring me peace.

No, my heart will continue to beat alone for the rest of my life.

As if I were the lone wind that chills me to the bone.

My heart will beat alone for the rest of my life, with no one to call my own.

As a result, from now on

I recognize that my heart may not be where it should be.

To another that may be able to beat on its own

However, this does not imply that I am completely alone.

Because the Lord above refers to me as his And who in this world could compete with The Lord, who has my soul in his hands to keep? own

Explanation:

Your poem sounds pretty good to me! However, a sonnet requires 10 syllables per line, and I think you can separate the lines into different stanzas.

Explanation:

Your poem/sonnet sounds amazing to me. Regardless of the improvements that could be made, your poem definitely touches my heart and sets a mood for the reader. You sure have a poet's heart!

different strategies reach different people based on their ability to understand the material. (from personal experience) when writing an argumentative essay write explaining the subject as though your audience never heard of it before and it is just being introduced, then explain why other people hate it also, afterward you would explain why that would be wrong. i hope that : )

the economic activity signified in that scenario is a. production

in general, market production makes reference to the elaboration of a product or service which is destinated for economic purposes (to be sold) at money-price in a market. such product or service has to be principally tradable for money.

there is no money exchange involved in distribution, generalized reciprocity or balanced reciprocity.