1) What is the best explanation of what needs revising in the following sentences? # 4 Jerry does begin to change at the beginning of the story. The act that truly shows how similar the two brothers are comes near the end of the story. At the very begin
contribute more money to his father's gift fund but is too late. His reaction at the end of the story shows how much he truly cares about his father.
A) The first sentence does not express a complete thought
B) The second sentence is jumbled and unclear
The sentences are choppy and need to be combined
D) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order

i’m not sure i need on this as well

the maori creation myth tells the story how humans were born and how nature in their birth by sacrificing themselves. according to this creation myth, the earth and heaven were once joined as ranhinui.   papatuanuku was the sky father and the mother ranhinui was the earth and they had many children. the children lived in the darkness and wanted to live in the light. the children separated the parents in order to live in the light. the parents continue to grieve for each other until the present day.

the haida creation myth is about a trickster named raven who stole the sun, the moon and the stars in order to bring light to his created world. he created animals, fish, trees, men, and all the creatures but they lived in darkness because of which he stole light.

based on a comparison of the myths “the maori: genealogies and origins in new zealand” and “the raven and the first men: the beginnings of the haida,” if the maori and the haida people decided to create a myth together, the importance of family will be the most likely values be expressed.

the maori and haida cultures are more similar than different because they have   important values in common. both the cultures value nature, family and sacrifice.