Read the following sentence, which needs revising, editing, and proofreading: The hot, humid greenhouse is a site for sore eyes starved of color by winter whiteness: orchids bloom in all the color of the
rainbow and ferns greenery is all over.
Which revision below is most effective?
The greenhouse is hot and humid, and it is a site for sore eyes starved of color by winter's whiteness because orchids bloom
in all the colors of the rainbow and green ferns grow all over.
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In the midst of the colorless white winter, the inside of the glass greenhouse was a sight for sore eyes. Orchids bloomed like
a multi-color rainbow amid the leafy greenery of ferns.
It was hot in the greenhouse, and humid. Orchids and ferns grew colorfully, in contrast to eyes bored by winter's whiteness.
Orchids and ferns filled the greenhouse, bringing relief to eyes starved of color by winter's whiteness.

Select the correct answers. what does this passage reveal about eric and garrett? the biggest race on the warm-up field, eric went through his usual routine of stretching so he’d be fully prepared for the race. in what seemed like just a couple of minutes, he heard the announcer. “all 400-meter runners, make your way to your starting lanes.” as eric got into position, another runner named garrett taunted him. “you do know there’s no way you’re going to beat the speed of speed, don’t you? ” he said with a chuckle. eric pretended he didn’t hear garrett and cleared his mind of everything. the announcer yelled, “runners, take your mark, get set! ” as the starting gun sounded, eric took off with the rest of the runners. garrett immediately sprinted ahead of the pack, but eric hung back and kept a close eye on garrett. as they turned the last corner and headed down the straightaway, eric stayed focused and picked up his pace. soon he was running right beside garrett. just a few yards from the finish line, eric made a strong push. he crossed the finish line just a few feet ahead of garrett. a. garrett and eric are both overconfident about their speed. b. garrett likes to boast about himself, while eric is more modest. c. eric is focused, whereas garrett is distracted. d. eric believes in warming up, while garrett prefers to sprint.

Ineed ideas for this essay something easy that i can do does anyone have any ideas on what i should write on for this 100 points ! write a procedural essay with media that is 1 ½–2 pages in length. clearly state your topic, and include all steps necessary to complete the procedure. you will submit your prewriting and planning documents along with your essay.

Is a psychological tool in which a person creates a detailed mental picture of an event. select the choice that best answers the question. a. stereotyping b. imaging c. visualization d. mentoring