Which revision would most improve the body paragraph?
w
O providing clear connections between the thesis and
Chisholm's syntax structure
adding more transitions to describe how the ideas in
the paragraph are related
using a clear topic sentence to connect the thesis of
the essay to its purpose
O including several more quotations that highlight the
positivity in the speech

the african society basically suffered the consequences of colonization and apartheid directly attacking the black people, first, during the colonialism and its main idea which which "white people" had better rights, affecting   them principally in the right to establish black people in their territories, access to quality education and health services and took away any civil right even to the black people to feel they have the same opportunities as the settlers.

the meaning of the word broods in verb form is a family of animals used in section 2