Descriptive writing should be (in other words, specific and vivid)
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Read the passage below and answer the question. somehow, it was hotter then: a black dog suffered on a summer’s day; bony mules hitched to hoover carts flicked flies in the sweltering shade of the live oaks on the square. men’s stiff collars wilted by nine in the morning. in the excerpt above, the phrase "stiff collars wilted by nine in the morning" suggests that despite the heat, men still dressed up the men in the town were vain men's clothing appeared its best on hot days the men were not accustomed to wearing nice clothes

Which phrase or word from the poem reviles the view of the authors believe that outgoing people tend to gossip or share information

Apply the ideas of the plain language movement to make the paragraph under "before" in section i more user-friendly.