Adding sensory details helps enrich writing and enables your reader to thoroughly experience the scene you are trying to describe. Notice in these two examples how each writer has created a unique character and scene based on the “telling” sentence. Write a descriptive paragraph for one of the four telling sentences below.

Telling Sentences:
1. I was exhausted.
2. The puppy was a terror.
3. My friend was so mad.
4. The substitute teacher was strange.

Showing paragraph:

What difference do you notice between this passage and contemporary pose.

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Subject: save the whales! dear professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. it’s up to us to speak up on their behalf. it’s really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and you’re the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e-mail more formal? check all that apply. a. removing the contractions b. removing the exclamation points c. removing the salutation d. removing the slang and casual speech e. removing the information about amusement parks