Analyze the given paragraph, and write, in the table below, your comments pertaining to its problems with the following elements, and also include your suggestions for finding solutions to these problems. unity and coherence
transitions to link sentences to one another
topic sentence
supportive evidence
The Paragraph
Throughout history both Africans and African-Americans have faced oppression and discrimination. Hughes emphasizes the events of the past and the present. Ancient Egypt is contrasted with modern America—the pyramids and the Woolworth Building. The extreme violence of racism is described in the atrocities committed in the Belgian Congo and in Hughes’ time with a lynching in Texas. So, individuals have suffered across time.

hello,

your answer is a) the metaphor suggests that the poetic themes are serious and dark.

collins is comparing the poem to a dark room. he is suggesting that the poems theme is serious and wants you to understand it. you don't need to understand the poet in order to understand the poem. you also don't need to move around while reading it. he is simply saying the poem has a dark and serious theme.

- i.a -

they both lost a woman they loved named lenore

they believed they interracted with a talking raven

they became orphaned at a young age.

question: energy distribution provides utilities, which are

answer: electrical utility industry is a major provider of energy in most countries.

explanation: they use this energy for company's so they distribute this to companies in other companies

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