Read the sentence. when we returned to school after summer vacation, our teacher asked us to be prepared to share about our summer activities. mark told us about his amazing visit to the great wall of china on friday. what is the best way to revise the underlined sentence? mark told us about his amazing visit on friday to the great wall of china. on friday, mark told us about his amazing visit to the great wall of china. his amazing visit to the great wall of china on friday, mark told us about it. the sentence is correct as written.