Read the students thesis. there have been many studies about the effect of too much television on children and whether it is harmful or beneficial. the best way to improve this thesis is to include the topic being discussed clearly take a position or side vaguely express a viewpoint cite the source of the study

Read the excerpt from the common sense of bicycling: bicycling for ladies. the bicycle is capable of such high speed that there is a strong temptation to ride so fast as to cause over exertion or excessive perspiration. on the other hand some people ride too slow, causing a zigzag and uncertain movement. while exercising reasonable caution, be a fearless rider. when you come to a steep hill, if the road is clear, let it go as fast as it will. if you rid yourself of that ghost of fear, coasting is one of the greatest delights of cycling. which is the best paraphrase of the text?