Ineed proofreading this article for my school paper i had a rough sophomore year but they me with my grades and brought them back up and this year( junior year) has been perfect but for both years there wasn't a lot of fun activities our school is too underfunded and most money we get goes to the middle school last year we had a halloween dance, prom, and we had deminoin of terror that's all we had for activities this year we have no halloween dance, no deminoin of terror and most likely from what i've prom but i see all these other sheboygan area schools having dances football games and all this other stuff but we can't even get a single dance, i understand that we are in school for education but we are also here for a great high school experience before have to be pushed into the adult world and never have anything like this again but overall there teachers and education system is great but we are really underfunded and don't get a full high school experience

Hello, I added commas where need and also changed some words so you might want to look over it again to see if it okay for you and I would like you to know it's a bit wordiness, so I recommend to improve readability, consider breaking this into multiple sentences.

I had a rough sophomore year, but they helped me with my

grades and brought them back up and this year( junior

year) has been perfect, but for both years there weren't

many fun activities our school is too underfunded, and

most money we get goes to the middle school last year we

had a Halloween dance, prom,and we had dominion of

terror that's all we had for activities this year we have no

Halloween dance, No rule of terror and most likely from

what I've heard...no prom but I see all these other

Sheboygan area schools having dances football games and

all this other stuff, but we can't even get a single dance,I

understand that we are in school for education but we are

also here for a great high school experience before have to

be pushed into the adult world and never have anything

like this again but overall there teachers and education

system is excellent but we are really underfunded and don't

get a full high school experience.

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