Which sentence best describes clustering?
a. you're generating words that suggest possible sentences or paragraphs.
b. you write down words or ideas that occur to you in no particular order.
c. you write down words or ideas in chronological order.
d. you're generating words that suggest possible themes for an essay.

i believe the answer is: b. mr. head had a long, tube-like face with a rounded open jaw and a short depressed nose.

this is because in the un-revised sentence it said that mr. heads face was long and tube-like, and he had a rounded open jaw. this is not a very grammatically correct because of how it seems to drag on with the and, replaced with, with, makes it sound more fluent in the description.

the answer is b, it brings the reader closer to the action.

it would've been a if the word had been determined, not conceited

hope this

-ironwolfx