Read the sentence jimmy carter's presidency was marked by several major national and international crises. is this thesis sentence too broad, too narrow, or balanced in scope? a. balanced b. too narrow c. too broad

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.