From “the christmas carol” what does the quote “ your nature intercedes for me, and pities me” mean. and also how does the quote affect the reader ?

Which is not among the style choices a writer would use, if he or she is trying to establish a formal writing style/

Arrange the events in ivan ilyich's life, which are described in chapters 1–4 of leo tolstoy's the death of ivan ilyich, in chronological order. ivan ilyich becomes assistant public prosecutor, a position that he serves in for seven years. ivan ilyich meets zachar ivanovich in st. petersburg and receives a guaranteed appointment in the department of justice. ivan ilyich graduates from the school of law and qualifies for the tenth rank of the civil service. ivan ilyich becomes a public prosecutor and is transferred to another province. ivan ilyich is offered the post of examining magistrate in a russian province.

Besides the revisions listed in the paragraph, what else can deepak do to strengthen his paper?