Can you revise this asap ! we have to think about the things the deceased wanted private on social media, yet, now they have no control. and really with social media its to much drama and with the online stuff these are things that we dont want our children doing stuff.

Social media is a form of technology that everyone loves to use. Some things is safe and then some things is not. When you post stuff it's not private people can stil screenshot,share, and show others. You can't make a child not use technology you just have to let them learn from their mistakes.

Afirefighter is a rescuer extensively trained in firefighting, primarily to extinguish hazardous fires that threaten life, property and the environment as well as to rescue people and animals from dangerous situations.  just cut some parts to make them shorter and add some of your facts or what describes them most. or what they are supposed to do.