How does this passage create tension in the story?

B.) The sentences suggest that grete is disgusted by her brother and dislikes caring for him.

Explanation:

This section of the text uses several methods to make us as readers, get invested and create tension in us, for example it starts with the small details that she notices, this gradual description makes us wonder what will happen next, creating tension. Also it states that she used a rag, this implies that she was disgusted by it because it belongs to her brother (there are no other reasons implied for the use of a rag)

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.