Read this story, which is in chronological order. last may, i decided to swim a mile without stopping. i knew i would need to be able to do it to join the coast guard, so i spent every morning practicing with my father. i thought of giving up many times. "i could be sleeping right now," i would cry out as my muscles ached. one morning, i started to doubt myself, so i imagined swimming to a person in need. before i knew it, i could hear my dad clapping. i had done it! write a version of the same story, this time starting the story in the middle.

Version of the same story starting in the middle.

When the thought of giving up crossed my mind, then I started doubting myself that I couldn't do it but I imagined myself swimming to rescue a drowning person, then I heard Dad clapping, it was then I knew I had done it.

I practiced with my Dad every morning for so many days enduring so much muscle pains because I knew I needed to swim a mile without stopping to be able to join the coast guard. I have finally achieved my goal after practicing every morning when I should be sleeping. The sacrifice is really worth the achievement.

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adding more details about the struggle rainsford experiences as he swims to the shore

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