Elise needs to revise her essay’s conclusion to use a more formal tone. hera is a greek goddess you should get to know. i like her because she’s strong, smart, and beautiful. which revision of elise's conclusion best uses a formal tone? 1. hera isn’t just an ordinary greek goddess. she’s powerful because she’s beautiful, smart, and really strong. 2. readers should become familiar with the greek goddess, hera. her strength, wisdom, and beauty set her apart from other olympians. 3. i think hera is the greatest of the greek goddesses. she’s not just beautiful, she’s also smart and strong. 4. everyone who reads about hera knows that she is a beauty. she also has strength and wisdom to boot!

The revision of Elise's conclusion that best uses a formal tone is the second one: Readers should become familiar with the Greek goddess, Hera. Her strenght, wisdom, and beauty set her apart from other Olympians.

Explanation:

I chose this option because it is the one that uses more formal words. All the conclusions do the same: they try to persuade the reader to investigate more about Hera. The difference between all of them is that the second one is more suitable for an essay because it uses formal terms. When writing an essay, you have to be careful and choose the right terms to express what you want your audience to know. It is a formal format and the words that you use when talking are not the correct ones to give the document a more serious tone.

never read it so if i had i would definitely you sorry.