Athesis should avoid which of the following?

Avoid burying a great thesis statement in the middle of a paragraph or late in the paper. Be as clear and as specific as possible; avoid vague words. Indicate the point of your paper but avoid sentence structures like, “The point of my paper is…” or " The idea is..."

Well i could construct a master piece but it will cost you a significant amount of cash that i prupose you wouldn't have