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by today’s standards, my mobile phone is pretty basic. it’s a nokia. it’s a small device that receives telephone calls and sends text messages. other than that, my phone / much. most of my friends wish they smartphones because they are cool and trendy. they say the thing about a smartphone is that you ‘can do everything with it! ’ that’s right, smartphones have many more functions than a simple phone, however, not all of them are needed. in everyday life, smartphones mainly for checking social networking sites, replying to emails, and playing games. grown-ups as well as like playing games. anyway, i prefer my good old nokia. it’s my mobile phone. when i bought it, it didn’t cost very much. and i am not afraid anyone will ever steal it. it’s also very reliable. yesterday i dropped it. it down the staircase and hit the wall. i thought that the end of it and i would have to buy a new one. but nothing of the kind – it still works properly!

b.science

explanation:

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.